us ne phool bheje hain
phir meri ayadat ko
aik aik patti mein
un labon ki narmi hai
un jameel hathon ki
khushgawar hiddat hai
un lateef sanson ki
dilnawaz khushbo hai
dil mein phool khilte hain
rooh mein charagan hai
zindagi mo'atar hai!
phir bhi dil ye kehta hai
baat kuch bana leta
waqt ke khazane se
aik pal chura leta
kash wo khud aa jata!
bas
kash wo khud he aa jata
2 comments:
Very good :)
if u add "he" in last line, the poem will re-adjust to the rhythm..
kash wo khud "he" aa jata!
Humble suggestion..
thanks its okay
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